This is one of my favorite colors and views.
The cloud is as expansive as sea today, but I know that it will be raining.
Oh, I'm scared the thunder. After the thunder came very strong rain.
Shit, I have no idea regarding Blog today, just wonder practiceing English = =
By the way, I like my withered rose. It had been put outdoor for several days.....
抱歉 我有點多事 可以別理我 ＸＤ
回覆刪除之前遇到有些人會希望別人幫忙抓文章裡自己看不到的錯這樣
你需要嗎？
第一張圖片下面那裡阿，怎麼前面是現在式，然後突然變成過去式？
一個句子結束要用句點喔，有些句子已經結束了不適合用逗點！
This is one of my favorite colors and views"."
By the way, I like my withered rose"."
Oh, I was scared the thunder"."
後面那句我猜是不是 I "have" no idea
wonder的話好像是「懷疑」的意思欸，是想寫「想」嗎？然後因為省略連接詞要加個ing
為什麼practice要of？
然後接下來就只是建議
today前面不一定要放介係詞on是不是啊？ (不放比較常見?
反而是it had been put outdoor "for" several days 或許需要介詞（？
rain當名詞的話也可以解釋成下雨，
不一定要轉換成動詞之後再修正成動名詞raining
比如說came very strong rain之類的
不過其實隨筆也不太需要管什麼文法 ＸＤＤ
嗚喔!!
回覆刪除你還真的用英文打了耶XDD
不過.......還要繼續加油ˊˋ